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February 2, 2010
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Hi again . This is the first poem I ever wrote. It might not be a POEM, but it was a trying after all.
I welcome any suggestion
When the sky opens its eye,
There are no clouds that fly.
Nor dark nor baby cry
But a space is between us, I sigh.
I still remember that land
WHere you did touch my hand.
THen stopped to give sound,
That love did start from underground.
I want to break the gray
And to begin then a new day
When the brave beats stop to say
I will love you for every day.
I have a crush only on you
I hope you feel the same way I do.
'cause everywhere to me
When I close my eyes and see
Your soul feeds mine and tells me
We will meet again under the tree.
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Hope you like it, and hope to read your comments on my new entry
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