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lilimira

lilimira

Algeria

January 6, 2009

friends,

a post on ebaby about our concept  of the word 'love' makes me think about sharing these words.i   have written them and i have translated them to  you.i have kept  only the meaning.

i wish you'll like them.Embarassed

 

from the window of my prison

i've sent a look on the orizon

i've seen kids shouting happiness

flowers having silk softness

and, the colours of the four seasons

which always have good reasons!

all this spectacle gives me faith,

dazzles me and i forget where i stand

from one look out of my doubts,

i have chassed all my shivers

the walls of stones became of glass!

bars of plants replaced those of iron!

my soul is lost in the air

and,my body wants to be hugged

love invaded my heart,

find place and setteled forever!!

 

 

 

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06:15 PM Sep 01 2009

*** NANA ***
Bahrain

I have read it once and twise

and really enjoyed it and liked it

thanks alot dear friend

 

07:08 PM Aug 11 2009

brnard444

brnard444
Mexico

 hi my frind am happy byfriend u

07:57 AM Jan 07 2009

lilimira

lilimira
Algeria

thanks friends for bothering yourselves and reading those words!!they are far from being a poem,they are just my feelings on paper.

life is wonderful what ever happens!!

i'm Smile  you liked them.

cheers,

lilimira.

01:45 AM Jan 07 2009

BLINK

BLINK
Pakistan

Love is the Water of Life

 

Everything other than love for the most beautiful God

 though it be sugar- eating. 

What is agony of the spirit? 

To advance toward death without seizing 

hold of the Water of Life.

Masnawi I 3686-87

06:42 PM Jan 06 2009

CRANberry

CRANberry
Russian Federation

You  have a real gift in writing poetry!

Wonderful words, wonderful maning!

Thank you for  sharing with such an amazing poem!Smile

 

06:03 PM Jan 06 2009

devindernagpal
India

Really WONDERFUL,

'LOVE'  has  not remain an action, but bcame being,

It happens when you are pure consciousness.

It can't be called a poem just, for me it is 'LIFE' itself.

I wish to dance.....

& the painting....wow...WONDER...WONDERFU...LLLLLL

Dev

11:33 AM Jan 06 2009

sunay

sunay
Turkey

 Lilimira,
Have you written this poem? It s fantastic and very meaningsful. The happenings in the nature which are described wonderfully in that poem and complete satisfaction of the children outside hugs me and invades my heart too, also without faith. I think those should not be just imagination but real life. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.

10:30 AM Jan 06 2009

Ryo23T

Ryo23T
Saudi Arabia

althought m englis is poor  so i didnt understand most

but i like it

keep wrtingSmile