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October 28, 2007

The magical power of seed

 Last Sunday, my dad and I were carrying hundreds of flowerpots indoors. My dad told me the plants would die if we left them outside in winter.  I was amazing that most of them have already grown into ground earth through the hole in the bottom of the pots. That reminds me of an article I learned when I was in the junior middle school. The article was about the power of seed. The seed of pine tree grows in the stone gap and finally becomes a thriftily tree. I remember someone said, maybe we cannot choose where we were born and what we were born, but we can choose how to be whom we want.

October 23, 2007

First,Beautiful Life.

Maybe movies about war are very common nowadays,but this classic movie is from anther point view of father's love.This movie shows how a great father prevents his son from hurting by the war in spirit. It is a moving comedy.So I think our life is beautiful if we hold a positive attitude.

Second,All about your dog.

It is a story about a dog named Pockey and its owner.I cried when I saw Pockey was running after the ambulance which its owner was in.And Pockey was looking for its owner all its life.

Dogs are human's good friends.However we don't know our good friends very much.Maybe we will have a friend betraying us,but our dog friends will never betray us.I adopped a little dog on the streetroad several months ago,now it grows much bigger than before.Once I get off work and see it,it swings its head and tail.I know it is very happy. 

Dogs usually live for 7 years.I will take care of my dog friend all its life.

12:33 AM Oct 24 2007

rlbruderick
United States

First, you should know that your writing is quite good, meaning that it is clear and easy to understand.  You communicate well in written English.  There are some very minor problems, though.

In English, punctuation has strict rules.  A comma should be placed immediately after the word it follows (no spaces) and it is followed by 1 space.  A period the same, except that it is often followed by 2 spaces.

So, good job.  By the way, I love the Beautiful Life movie.  I haven't seen the dog movie, yet.

Rick

October 22, 2007

CoolWelcome all!

06:19 AM Oct 22 2007

sunu
India

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