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January 14, 2008

want to meet new freinds from all over the world, new cultures, new customs,

this is my first poem

 

pls i want your comments

 

My girl reveals my tongue to say in this pretty, sweetness words.

My girl raise your head up your beautiful didn’t found all over the world.

Your clear face always flashes the light as lamb.

Your eyes looking sheen recover ill heart.

Length of your rude glue till the old man.  

Your smile view enforces the moon to be as small candle.

The birds try imitating your voice but he cannot do that.

Your sweet voice tunes don’t accept any alternative.

You owe Delicate emotion teach others your sense. 

Teach that femininity character can't accept alternatives.  

You are soul generation learn them how the love should be .

My pretty girl you reveal me to taste love and poetry. 

 Who drop in your sweet love become the vigil his friend.    

whats your opinion