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natasha8965

China

April 29, 2010

Well, Monsieur Cui asked us to write a poem with end rhyme in the class, well here is mine:Knowing nothing else to do, With agony we all go to school,Where teachers treat us as fool,Just quit it would be really cool

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07:21 AM May 02 2010

handwriter

handwriter
Norway

Are not those who continue to go to school to be taught by an even greater fool than ourselves - should we not be considered fools?

11:25 AM Apr 29 2010

handwriter

handwriter
Norway

I guess I could call it something else, but I would not be right and still be understood - I mean to me what you have written is clearly a poem.  If you were to call it anything other than a poem, what would you call it?

 For example:  if you were to call a shoe anything other than a shoe, what would you call it differently - still expressing a covering for the foot - having a sturdy sole and that deesn't reach above the ankle - athelet's foot?

My point: it's a poem, and a well wriiten one.  Good job.

Note: I am assuming that we are using English here, otherwise, all bets are off.

doni

10:55 AM Apr 29 2010

pouya1368

pouya1368
Iran, Islamic Republic Of

hi my name is pouya .from iran.iwanna learn english and finde more friend. good luck