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samsiami

samsiami

Saudi Arabia

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October 16, 2008

My Soul"

Samsiami   

Shall I compare thee to a butterfly?

 

When in joy, your fairy wings take you high.

 

When in sadness, you just stay and keep sigh.

 

As for your tears say: good bye.

 

And as for your troubles say: you must die.

 

Listen to your reason and open wide your eye.

 

Say the truth but don't lie.

 If that nay happen, You would always be ashamed and shy, of your disgraceful deeds,

And you would keep cry.

 

My soul, you should try,

 That may again you could fly.

08:30 PM Dec 16 2008

maya_run

maya_run
Thailand

so deep n touch (^^)

08:10 AM Oct 24 2008

Lost in ur eyes
Saudi Arabia

Your soul will fly again  and it shall be with no stain

Great effort, a poem with a lot of deep meanings which i don't think i understand ^^

07:48 AM Oct 24 2008

dignified

dignified
Turkey

Great.Keep it up.I felt  jealousy as I read the poem as an amateur poet:)

10:02 AM Oct 18 2008

Abadi_7

Abadi_7
Japan

Nise peom , I liked it ..

02:25 PM Oct 17 2008

samsiami

samsiami
Saudi Arabia

With the assistance of my instructor, I wrote this poem ;)

03:03 AM Oct 17 2008

DS

DS
Algeria

Nice poem, did u write it urself?