my first english poem

hi dear friends. I like composeing . but my Native language is Persian. I have never composed any poem in english. but I'm going to do this. so the followin poem is my first english poem. pleas help me to remove my mistakes.

Raindrops are falling

and the wind fondles her face

while the Sweet Girl is Laughing

she croon whit herself

be sure the sun shines

be careful the wind chines