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sindyzhang

China

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April 16, 2008

   It is a great place.I hope I can find many new friends here.

   now I am a junior and most of my classmates are having their plans for their futures,some of them will choose to study abroad or take the graduate school entrance exam,others are busy in finding a job. For me ,I want to prepare the entrance exam,it needs a long period,so I need some one to listen to me,or maybe we can communicate with each other about everything if you like.

   I live in Sichuan province,the weather this year is changable.How about your country or district?

  if you would ,just send me messages.Welcome you pointing out my errors in this essay. Having a nice day!

  

08:20 AM Apr 16 2008

sindyzhang

sindyzhang
China

thank you for your comments.

I will contact you ,my msn is sindysuceed@hotmail.com

 

08:09 AM Apr 16 2008

lalan_tt

lalan_tt
Viet Nam

Hi Sindyzhang,

I would like to be one of ur listener, too

I am also a studying English student, I hope that we can help each other move on ,ok?

I don't know whether I am wrong or not but I really wanna share with u what I think.

In general, ur essay is real good, congratulation^^!, there are just some very small, small mistakes( my subjective opinion)

First, I think u should use "some of my friends or just some" instead of  some one cause some one is a pron which means indefinite person and in here U metioned ur friend already,so every one knows who u are talking about, it is not some one at random, ringht?

Second, u had  better say "entrance exam"for "entering exam". And we have structure " to be busy doing somethig", so u can apply it into ur essay ...

Please tell me what u think so that we can learn from each other and make progress

Speak soon,

Lalan_tt

06:30 AM Apr 16 2008

yilonglucky
China

Hello!Please never mind I come from China,Hoho~~

M a freshman from Jiangxi Province.I have to admit I must learn English much more to catch up with U,but M sure I can~_~

And maybe I have no the ability to communicate freely with U,but I really want to B the listener eagerly!Give me a chance,please!

And,is that "be busy in something" right?Not "busing",hoho,maybe m wrong,and tell me why,ok?

And I think U R preparing "for" your entering balabala,maybe m wrong again,and tell me the answer,please,hoho

And,hoho,U come from Sichuan Province,right?Not......

M really really really so sorry to guess some "errors"......

But at the same time I really really want to B one of your listeners.

Please excuse me!

06:02 AM Apr 16 2008

diaorongd

diaorongd
China

on my opinion you are bettet than me!I live in  chongqing.I am a college studen in chongqing institute of technology. everything goes well!