Good morning.. Check out my poem.

Hi boys and girls from around the world and good morning to you. Well, It is just a great day, so, I've decided to interchange my thoughts and my words of feeling through a poem I've written long time ago when I was in the first year at the University.

I will put all my faith on you. I am just like everybody else in here, I make mistakes, so, if you caught any mistake whether grammatically or in spelling, inform me at once and with explanations as well so I can learn a lesson and all of my friends here learn as well. By the way, comment on the poem once you read it and I really appreciate criticism and critics.

Here I begin and here I start my journey in the English world. The poem entitled : The Stray Child. Share your thoughts.

1. A stray child lost, roaming the streets,
2. Hearing terrible songs,
3. No one even  seeks out to treat,
4. An innocent child cannot eat.

1. In monochrome nights, he weeps,
2.  Has anyone dared to look?
3. At a stray child who is weak?
4. Fighting his sorrow's loneliness,
5. Just to live in peace.

1. Dancing with the night's wind alone,
2. His favorite song, the spirit of the night,
3. Yet, no one glared to see him grieve,
4.  Bleeding tears upon his mother's breast,
5. Mother "I want to be like the rest."

1. "Where are the night's tones?"
2.  Sing for him the song of the moon.
3.  Let him rest in peace, Live in peace.
4. In your silence lap, only he weeps.  

Sorry, but it seems the Blog Entry Doesn't support things like poems. Anyway, I hope you like it as well as feeling it.