shadikhoshdel
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November 25, 2011
hi dear friends. I like composeing . but my Native language is Persian. I have never composed any poem in english. but I'm going to do this. so the followin poem is my first english poem. pleas help me to remove my mistakes.
Raindrops are falling
and the wind fondles her face
while the Sweet Girl is Laughing
she croon whit herself
be sure the sun shines
be careful the wind chines
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