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April 5, 2008

Hi friends , i decided to put some of my essays that i wrote as practice for Toefl on my profile. i hope you guys helpe me and correct me to find my errors.

 

Topic 1 : People attend college or university for many diffrent reasons (For example , new experience , career preparation , increased knowledge) why do you think people attend college or university ?

contrary to old days when people paid much less attention to the education, and an insignificant number of people pursued their studies in tertiary level, in present day youngsters and even aged people are keen to study in college and university for variety of reasons that some of which is mentioned in the Topic sentence.
As I see it, in addition to those reasons, some people go for university studies because of respect that university degree might bring them. It is argued that people holding university are more honorable in society. The way people look at educated individuals is far different and better than they look at uneducated ones.
Promotion in job is another argument encouraging people to conduct their supplementary education. the more educated you are, the more chance you have to get promotion thus you can have a better life.
In my opinion, receiving respect in milieu and getting promotion in career are two potential reasons that tempt people to study in college and university.

 

 

01:08 AM Apr 07 2008

adelaram

adelaram
Greece

Dear Mehrzad,

Hi, nice to meet you.Your topic,you wrote about obtaining knowledge is worthy of concideration.

To tell the truth I have never wonderd why people want to attend Higher educational institutions.As you have mentioned it might be for different reasons,varying from person to person.I myself have graduated from 2 such high educational institutions and I am studiing now as well.But I never thinked about it.I just like studying.It is interesting for me.I prefer to study ,rather lost my tiime idle,watching TV and so on.

I like very much to learn new languages.I speak fluently 6 languages ,Farsi as well.I am not Iranian but I like persian language ,culture and history very much.

So if you think it is worthy of your time to be my friend don't hesitate to contact me.I'll improve in this way as my English as well as my Farsi,but above all I 'll obtain a very nice friend.

Best wishes,

Adelaida

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