Could someone help me with my Chinese, please?

Hello!

 Could someone help me with these Chinese sentences I wrote? I am wondering if any of them are incorrect. Any help would be really, really appreciated!

 Lesson 33 Things/Something. [finished 3/26/08]

陈 先生 想 喝 东西。Mr. Chen would like to drink something.
陈 先生 想 喝 一点 东西。Mr. Chen would like to drink a little something.
她 想 喝 东西。He would like to drink something.
她 想 喝 一点 东西。She would like to drink a little something.
我 想 喝 东西。I would like to drink something.
杨 先生 想 喝 东西。Mr. Yang would like to drink something.
我 想 喝 一点 东西。I would like to drink a little something.
郑 先生 想 吃 东西。Mr. Zheng would like to eat something.
我 想 吃 一点 东西。I would like to eat a little something.
王 小姐 不 想 吃 东西。Ms. Wang would not like to eat anything.
这个 商店 有 很 多 东西 可以 买。This store has a lot of things you can buy.
那个 商店 有 很 多 东西 可以 买。That store has a lot of things you can buy.
这个 商店 没 很 多 东西 可以 买。This store does not have a lot of things you can buy.
我 要 去 商店 买 东西。I will go to the store to buy things.
她 要 去 商店 买 东西。She will go to the store to buy things.
我 不 想 买 东西。I don't want to buy anything.
他 学 东西 快。He learns things quickly.
学生们 学 东西 快。The students learn things quickly.
我的 学生们 学 东西 快。My students learn things quickly.
中国 学生们 学 东西 快。Chinese students learn things quickly.
郑 先生 学 东西 快。Mr. Zheng learns things quickly.

Aljensen:你的中文棒极了，不过就是翻译的有点生硬…

So, then what are the mistakes with the sentences? Are there any grammar errors?

Hmmm.

No grammatical mistake. But we would say:

XXX先生/小姐 想喝/吃/买点儿东西/什么.

I don't want to buy anything. 我什么也不想买.

my students/chinese students 我的／中国学生In these sentences ＂们＂can be ommited.

唉！說來丟臉，台灣被上吐(杜)下瀉(謝)加連莊,把教育給搞得已經快沒國文，只剩國語了。說來慚愧！

在这里有很多中国的朋友都可以帮助你，我也可以！

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Fathma: What is the difference between 国文&国语?

  國語 is the national language.Since you are the people of this country,you learned it from your parents as a matter of course.

  國文 have something to do with the level of education .If you are educated well,the expression of your language would be elegant and cultivation.

  In the past eight years of crazy policy the level of education is on the down grade quickly.

  We are very worry about it now.

wangdongxue, thank you very much!!!