Share your poems

I like to write poems(but I'm not a good poet).I think so many people like me.I have a poem want to share for everybody.It's for my BFF,maybe it's not so great but I'm truly when I write it.

For my BFF 

My dear,BFF
You are the best
When I need your hand
You're my best friend.

Your beautiful eyes
Like sunshine in the sky
And when I cry
You'll tell me "It's fine."

We are friends
We're together forever
I know we will
Because BFF
That means Best friend forever

And You're my BFF.

 

What do you think? Tell me.

And if you have any poems want to share.Share it!

Thank you for readed.Don't laugh at me because it's my first poem.

Wisces, i think its a good start! Go on!
(i also have one poem but its too long to write in here ;) )

Thank you very much.

You can check out my poems in my blogs on e-baby :P

Ok I will. But why don't you share now,here?

My mind is too full of myself that
there is no place for you to rest.
My mind is so full of false wishes that
there are no place for you to be free.
My helpless dark minds take away
the place you shall rest
My mind is like a sad tornbush
that I can not win my sadness.
That weak bundled branch cry together
Whenever the wind blows
The tired little birds looking for a place to rest
cry away pocked by the needles,
Whenever there were winds
it was so lonely, hard and
I sang the sad songs endlessly
My mind is too full of myself that
there is no place for you to rest.

I think this is good poem winces:))congratulations:)

I wanna write my poems one of  but first I must translation to english…

hey wisces, your poem is so beautifull. i like to write poems but i can not do it in english, i have to learn more vocabulary!! i have lots of poems in spanish… see u..

can u write another one? :)

Hey thank you all.I will try my best to write more poems.

And your poem is so great too,Roadlamp

If u have any poems,just share it. :)