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Love Story

bakour

bakour

Syrian Arab Republic

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November 2, 2007

Well... I've read this story and I liked it, I don't know who wrot it but I wanted to share it with all of you.

In the past, there was no man on the Earth, the good things (virtues) and the bad things (vices) have nothing to do, they felt that everything was boring, so they decided to innovate new game to break that boredom, they called it : blind man buff, everyone liked this idea.

The “Madness” said: I’d like to start, he started counting, one two three........

Everyone went to hide himself.

The “Gentleness” found place to hide on the surface of the moon.

The “Treason” found place to hide in the garbage.

The “Fondness” found place to hide among clouds.

The “Longing” found place to hide in the inside of Earth.

The “Lie” said loudly: I was going to hide under rocks then he was going to the bottom of lake!

The “Love” couldn’t decide where was going to hide because he had no idea where he could hide (The love can’t hide himself),at the end he found one place between the flowers to hide in.

*The madness finished the counting’ at this time every virtues and vices have found place to hide in.

The “Lazing” was first one who appeared because he didn’t work hard to hide.

Then the Gentleness appeared from the moon.

The madness had found everyone but love (you can’t find the love easily), then the “Envy” told the Madness where the love hid himself.

The Mdness took a prickle and started to prickle the flowers till he heard  the voice of someone who was  crying, the Madness had prickled on the Love’s eye and made him blind.

The Madness felt sorry about love and decided to help the love and lead him on the road .“ Since that time we find that the love is blind and the madness is leading him”

sorry...

09:11 PM Nov 15 2007

jessica.han
China

Tongue out

01:16 PM Nov 15 2007

learner85

learner85
Morocco

Hi it is a nice story.i like it,and it reminded me of shakespearean plays,which dealt with the theme of love and they convey the message which is:love is blind it means that the lovers are guided by their hearts feelings without using their mind.

Smile

05:24 PM Nov 02 2007

Payoyita

Payoyita
Ecuador

You are very creative I liked it

 

01:06 PM Nov 02 2007

alya6-1
Russian Federation

I think your story is very nice! I like it very much.You are Well Done!