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baby99

Mexico

My english is not really good, but I'm trying to improve it, and I think this web site is a good way to beggining, please if some body wants to tell me what in this paragraph is wrong I'' really apreciate it.

04:49 AM Sep 21 2006 |

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Elpasoan

Germany

My English is not really good, but I'm trying to improve it, and I think this website is a good way to begin. Therefore, if somebody could please tell me what is wrong in this paragraph,  I would really apreciate that.

This is what I think needs to be changed. Of course, there are other – and most likely more idiomatic - ways to say that, but I am not a native English speaker. 

08:47 PM Sep 21 2006 |

janiss

janiss

United States

My English is not very good, but I'm trying to improve it. I think this website is a good way to begin. If somebody would please tell me what in this paragraph is wrong I'd really appreciate it. 

 

There are many ways you could write that paragraph out.  

01:31 AM Sep 22 2006 |