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Kay tan

Kay tan

China

March 6, 2009

Finally the rain stopped. What a sunny day!  My mood is easily affected by weather, so now I feel everything around me is sooo beautiful…the sun shines, birds sing, tree leaves glow…except for my English poems--- the poems I wrote several years ago as assignment for my writing class. Just now when tidying my room I found them, my poor products that were once my pride but for years have been completely forgotten and deserted. Now as I reread them, I laughed and realized how childish I was then to just follow the form but ignore the meaning. Look at what I’ve written---

The Best Day

The very day when I was born was such

A day that my parents long for so much

For the first time of my life did I see

So many beautiful things around me

Bestowed by God a hopefully new start

I felt excitement and hope in my heart

So there is hardly any day on earth

That is more meaningful than a child's birth

Did God really bestow me something since I'm not a christian? How could I have such rich emotions on the first day of my life? And obviously there are more events much more important than children's birth, hehe. But I'm happy that my perceptive ability develops, and that the poems brought me joy together with the sunshine. if we see things from a positive perspctive, everything is meaningful and pleasurable, isn't it?

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07:12 AM Aug 27 2009

shpeter
Denmark

hi : nice to meet u .cool girl my msn : shpeter_au@hotmail.com hope to know u

04:16 AM Mar 10 2009

Vincent_lin
China

u are really a poet, although I am engineer, not more interested in poem, but I still can feel ur happiness from ur poem. I think u have high talent to be a famous poet as long as u keep studying hard for it^_^

11:47 PM Mar 06 2009

chenduo
China

你是一个感情很丰富的 小女孩 很高兴和你交朋友

11:45 PM Mar 06 2009

chenduo
China

你是一个感情很丰富的 小女孩 呵呵 希望能和你交朋友

11:32 PM Mar 06 2009

1111l1

1111l1
China

I don't like rainy day either...And your poem is funny