What's my English accent like?

Hi all !

My second note is focused on "English Accent". I have just recorder myself reading a part of the text from book. So, here it comes

"Daisy Hamilton was a private detective. She was thirty years old and had been a detective for the past two years. Every morning she went to her office to wait for phone calls or open the door to clients needing her services. Daisy wasn't very well known yet but occasionally people telephoned her from the advertisement she had put in the local newspaper."

My recorded voice :

http://pl.youtube.com/watch?v=XErSuLBYknw

Some words about me :

Age : 18

Native speaker of Polish

And i am learning English for about 8 years (probably more less), and most important thing, i am having hard times now because i am ill (flu) so my words can change a little

So it is all from me, keep doing greate fun and make yours speaking recorded !